good entry
at 1:09, the rapid change of style from ambient calm to a rock type of feel, felt right.
also i liked the high pitch electric guitar at 2:30.
9/10 because i didn't much like how the voice and guitar didn't match tone at the 3 minute mark.
great theme here, keep it up my friend.
it was interesting
but it was too "all over the place".
you had some theme going, and it was consistent.
the drums were a bit vague.
what did you use for the guitar sound? it's good.
keep it up.
i'm telling you, it's not shit.
in fact, it's great! it was a very harmonious, interesting and unique song.
and 8-bit music sucks.
keep it up man!
Thank you, tonezter !
I can listen to original 8bit music quite a while...but at some point my ears DO need a break ;) Maybe that´s why i prefer to remix C64 tracks !?
I will, mate ! Thanx for giving me motivation !!
yeah, it's cool
it has some professional-sounding elements to it. reminds me of a wipeout game. get 'er done and submit, i'm looking forward.
Thx.
Sure I will :)
yeah!
good work on the drums my friend!
everything was good except the excessive abuse of frequency hopping up and down like a rabbit in the beginning.
keep it up that was great!
very decent
are the distorted kick/ bass sounds intentional or did you just crank the gain on them and not compress? i like them.
never heard the spy vs spy theme, but whatever, nobody cares about spy vs spy anyway.
i'd get rid of the claps and add some drums to give it a richer sound.
i like the kick timing but the kick itself can be edited.
sounds good, keep it up!
i don't know, man.
to me, it just felt empty and i dislike that stock kick sound.
some professional sounds in here though.
also, get rid of those high pitched random notes and add a theme.
distorted music but i can see it being made into a consistent composition if some effort was put into it.
Thanks for the comment I will work on the suggestions you made and only one thing I dont really understand the theme thing hahah I only made this guided by what I feel so I really dont prupose a theme any idea of how to make it. Well thanks again for your comment and see my future work.
consistent
you had a very consistent theme going on there my friend. it could have been given just a little variety as it did tend to be repetitive.
nice pad and good use of volume and frequency automations.
this deserves a good score, don't lose hope, people expect epic and just give 0's and 1's for LULZ. it makes their day. whatever - right?
good work, i like this composition, keep it up.
less reeverb indeed.
you had some really nice notes there with a good selection of chords, but it didn't keep my interest through to the end.
and YES, you really did abuse the reeverb. just a little less of reeverb value would do it good.
besides that, as i said i like the note selection and the sad mysterious theme of this composition.
keep it up.
Thank you for the review. I like the reverb because it really makes each note sound out and make this collective eerie hum in the background. However, later on in the song it does sound a bit much, and I currently don't know how to fix that problem, but thank you for the advice and constructive criticism, it's always greatly valued.
- Arron -
beginning = amateur.
or perhaps it isn't, but it sure sounds very amateur. sparked a fragment of my interest when the beat kicked in. sounds somewhat like aphex twin and i'm not a huge fan.
-consistent and repetitive (not a bad thing, you used the two elements wisely).
you have potential my friend, as i could hear very professional sounds. even
though i can make a melody, that's something i lack.
i'd play around with the filters and some other knobs with that low short synth in the beginning.
good work though.
Well, I did play around with a lot of filters. I was hoping people would notice all the things I did with the vocal sample that I used. All of the vocals are just one sample sliced.
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